Abby applies to be a submissive for Nathaniel West, the rich guy and business man. She spends the weekends in his home, obeying his orders. Aside of fucking in every room of the house, they have a pretty good time together; they cook meals I carve for, they have fun in the snow outside.
The settings are well written. I can almost see in front of me the slave being naked, on her knees,
waiting for her Master to enter the door. Even the characters are interesting; the elegant Nathaniel with the mysterious past, the fluffy librarian Abby with her kinky desires, the family members, the exes, the friends, even Appollo, the dog. All vivid and living characters. They have real life adventures, desires, even fears.
My problem is with the sex, which should be BDSM according the title and the cover. But what you get is plain fucking. Okay, the Master fucks Abby's mouth sometimes hard. Aside of this, every sex scene is simple vanilla sex, with some presence of submission toys and some spanking. Oh and there is one occasion of anal - it is so romantic my tears almost poured out. It misses any primal instinct of lust when you have wild butt sex.
The settings are well written. I can almost see in front of me the slave being naked, on her knees,
waiting for her Master to enter the door. Even the characters are interesting; the elegant Nathaniel with the mysterious past, the fluffy librarian Abby with her kinky desires, the family members, the exes, the friends, even Appollo, the dog. All vivid and living characters. They have real life adventures, desires, even fears.
My problem is with the sex, which should be BDSM according the title and the cover. But what you get is plain fucking. Okay, the Master fucks Abby's mouth sometimes hard. Aside of this, every sex scene is simple vanilla sex, with some presence of submission toys and some spanking. Oh and there is one occasion of anal - it is so romantic my tears almost poured out. It misses any primal instinct of lust when you have wild butt sex.
Read any story written by damonx; there is much more submission, dom/sub play or sometimes on the edge of humiliation in any of them.
So... should you read The Submissive? It can be an entertaining book for a long travel or for a summer trip. But definitely not a guide to BDSM sex. It's just a romantic love story with lots of spanking and face fucking. If you're into this kind of stuff, you should give it a try.
So... should you read The Submissive? It can be an entertaining book for a long travel or for a summer trip. But definitely not a guide to BDSM sex. It's just a romantic love story with lots of spanking and face fucking. If you're into this kind of stuff, you should give it a try.
